Finished this script by Tom O'Connor.
Story's about a firefighter that witnesses a brutal murder at the hands of an Aryan leader intent on a turf war. The firefighter must go into witness protection until it's time to testify at the trial.
The story's...ok. I seriously doubt there's enough here for a feature though. This plays much better on the small screen. O'Connor writes fast and his pages flow nicely. However, he doesn't bring anything new to this tired tale of a man taking justice in his own hands when the law fails him.
The action sequences aren't spectacular. The plot twists aren't surprising. The lead isn't engaging.
The characters are stock and the story's connect-the-dots.
This is a definite pass.
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