Finished this script by Jenna Milly & Ann Marie Allison.
Story's about a married couple that find out the husband accidentally never signed their marriage license, making their marriage invalid. They then go through trials and tribulations in trying to decide whether or not they want to get married for real.
For this script to work, the trials and tribulations have to be enormous. The bigger, the better. Here, all we get is the husband rekindling a romance with an ex and the wife's business partner telling her he's been secretly in love with her all this time.
Those complications are too run-of-the-mill to hold interest. This is the kind of script you can see where everything's going twenty pages before you read them.
It's got an interesting premise but the writers are unable to deliver the goods.
Pass on the writers. I'd give the concept to someone else and let them run with it.
No comments:
Post a Comment