Tuesday, November 1, 2011

TEST DRIVE

Finished this script by Adam Aresty.

Aresty.  Cannot.  Write.  It's as simple as that.  The characters are a joke.  The plot is a joke.  The action is a joke.  And this is not a comedy.

Story's about a crooked cop who's going to rob three criminal brothers who each have a key to individual safes which can only be open during a set amount of time.  The cop is going to hit all three safes but in order to do, he kidnaps a former race-car driver who can speed through the streets fast enough to all three safes before time expires.

Folks, a plot doesn't get more ridiculous than this. 

Script is a total waste.  The race-car driver's family is kidnapped to ensure that he goes through with the plan.  Standard stuff written in a substandard way.

Pass on the script and a big pass on the writer. 

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